Wednesday, March 3, 2010

A Walk by the Moonlight

Tonight the sky's dark and the moon is bright,


I am walking down the road stepping ahead slight,


Then i see a shiny star gazing at me from a far off sight,


I am happy,i am relieved as the moment is abit sweet,


I am sweating as the proximity is scary, my legs are trembling as the shining light fades,


though truly the darkness now invades,I close my eyes and dare to walk again,


I enchant your name, though ur not thre to make me feel light,


I ask you to hold me tonight as im afraid to get fright,


Slowly the path gets clearer and the road gets bright for you being with me to make me come out of that horrible plight,


I feel as if a patient recovered from trauma, i feel pacified, i feel composed, i feel gratified,


Suddenly my lips open up and get in the rhythm divine for me to make myself believe that i am alive,


My tongue rolls up in joy and soft whistles come out and fly and high and louder in the sky,


My feet wandering where they are going as my soul has got into a jet not boeing,


Finally my eyes open up and see a ray of light, a ray of freshness, a ray of life, a ray of dawn,


Making me realize its still time to dream as the world is still in sleep,


You made me strong in my dreams, You made me Smile,

hope ur somewhere , hope u exist,Hope ur beautiful, hope ur nice, hope ur pretty, hope ur kind, hope you are rapturous, hope ur sweet, i hope this all is not dream but life,

hope i am wrong ur right,

Because, when ull be thre in my sight,i am gonna shout and say,,,

I love you,

Though the words are socially right!!!

16 comments:

  1. Simply wow!didnt knw ur such a good composer of wordings... its rly amazin the way u expressed ur feelings so beautifuly n clearly in this poem full of love! lookin forward for more of this kind! keep it up!

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  2. Thanks so much!!!thats indeed a heartily and motivating response...ill try for bttr nex time

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  3. very nice........hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
    hope ur somewhere , hope u exist,Hope ur beautiful, hope ur nice, hope ur pretty, hope ur kind, hope you are rapturous, hope ur sweet, i hope this all is not dream but life,

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  4. Hey...its seriously very nice...i read it nd felt as i was dreaming d same...well its nice....keep it up....

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  5. gud work buddy.....insightful and beautiful thoughts knit well in this amazing poem..keep it up :)

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  6. i like the flow...............starts off from a dark and moonlit night.... but ends up with a hope, a ray of light................this is rightly matched with a perseverant and positive person like you. love you.

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  7. Awesome..... :)
    Really Nice :)
    Now keep writing :)

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  8. Dude awesome pretty thoughts, amazingly showing flow of emotions and optimism.
    The way of speaking about walk on the moon light , shows a true love for someone
    The word combine show your strong emotion for your parents specially mother and a unknown love one…
    Past two years you hide this skill from us …now keep writing
    Love you dear …

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  9. Thank U Launde!!!Ill try my best...

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  10. Abhi yaar...wht can i say...the imagination n d combination of thoughts are gr8...the rhyme really blends well wid each word...n dream...awesome...love u..muuachh...

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  12. nice. . . .!!! go deeper in ur thoughts n solace n m sure d best is yet to be disovered. . . !!!
    godless !!

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